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karynnj

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6. Why would someone read your posts or listen to the YouTube over already available alternatives?

Reply to TheEnlightenedBiglet (Original post)

Sun Mar 8, 2026, 10:04 AM

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Taking this as a sample of your writing, it has serious flaws. It is repetitious and the lack of paragraphs makes it hard to read.

I have no idea how old you are, but this writing would get a poor grade in a good high school English class. If your goal is to be a journalist, you probably need to take writing and journalism classes.

As to content, it might help to link to a sample or at least explain your expertise.

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Thank You! and good morning! TheEnlightenedBiglet Saturday #3

As a journalist, you should learn to use paragraphs. Intractable Saturday #2

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Thank you for the warm welcome ! TheEnlightenedBiglet 20 hrs ago #10

Why would someone read your posts or listen to the YouTube over already available alternatives? karynnj Sunday #6

Thank you! TheEnlightenedBiglet 22 hrs ago #8

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REAL and I agree TheEnlightenedBiglet 22 hrs ago #9

A good start would be refraining from calling anyone, a lib. PuraVidaDreamin 19 hrs ago #11

If you're offended by the word lib, my writing style won't be for you. TheEnlightenedBiglet 19 hrs ago #12